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The "Standard of Ur" from ancient Mesopotamia

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30 November 2012

Guest post: Constructing spells for fantasy

Today I welcome author Karin Gastreich to "For Love of Words." She is sharing the process by which she constructed magic spells for the fantasy world of her novels,the Kingdom of Moisehén.

Constructing Spells for Fantasy
by Karin Gastreich

Recently, a reader asked me to write a post about the spells in my novel Eolyn. Magic is a fundamental component of fantasy worlds, and so spells often form an integral part of world-building.

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I am unaware of any hard-and-fast rules for crafting spells, but I have come across some interesting debates in my journey as a writer.

I’ve heard fellow authors say, for example, that it’s best not to include verbatim spells at all; that funky language often distracts from the story itself. Others have contradicted this advice by insisting that spells add authenticity.

I have also witnessed debates over which spells to include. At one of my writers group meetings we once had a lively discussion on the dangers of writing spells for summoning demons as part of our stories. Some members argued that verses of dark magic should be left out altogether, because even fictitious spells might actually have some potency if they fall into the wrong hands.

For my part, I do not believe the spells we make up for storytelling have any power in the real world, for good or ill. No matter how many times you repeat the spell provided by the hag Ghemena in chapter two of Eolyn, you will not be able to heat up that cup of cold water containing a sprig of fresh mint with your bare hands. If you really want some hot tea, you need to put the teapot on the stove and do things the old fashioned way. (Or you can recite the spell while you put the cup in the microwave—not only will that work, it might even feel more like “magic.”)

In the earliest drafts of Eolyn, I did not include any verbatim spells. I began crafting spells at the suggestion of one of the members of my writers group.

I am not a linguist, so the first thing I decided was that the grammar—and vocabulary—of my spell language would be as simple as possible. In addition, I knew spells would have to be highly structured, reflecting the rigid organization of magic in the Kingdom of Moisehén.

Spells would also have to incorporate an important core belief of the magas and mages: All magic is a gift from the Gods, a power mediated through their messenger Dragon and brought into manifestation by the intent of the practitioner.

With these thoughts in mind, this is how I put together my spells:

photo taken by Julia Shapiro
In the tradition of Moisehén, all spells begin by calling upon Dragon. Dragon has two sacred names, Ehekaht, which reflects its female nature, and Ehekahtu, which reflects its male nature. In general, magas invoke the female manifestation of Dragon and mages invoke the male manifestation, but this is more a matter of cultural tradition than a necessary practice. Magas who invoke Ehekahtu and mages who invoke Ehekaht are just as likely to be successful in their spells, as long as their intentions are properly focused.

The body of a spell is constructed as a petition to the Gods. For example:

Naeom means “give us.”

Faeom means “protect us.”

Elaeom means “take us.”

See how easy I made the grammar? There’s only one option, ever, for conjugating those sacred verbs!

Following the command, it’s just a matter of stating what the practitioner wishes to be given or protected from or where she wants to be taken. For example:

Naeom tzefur means “give us heat.”

Faeom dumae means “protect us from the enemy.”

You can then add simple qualifiers to indicate in what form and for what purpose you want the heat to manifest, or who you consider your enemy, and so forth.

Because all mages and magas are well-mannered (even when they are at war with one another), a spell always ends by thanking Dragon and the Gods she represents. The sacred word for “thank you” is Ehukae or, less commonly, Ukahe.

So a complete (if simple) spell might look like this:

Ehekaht naeom tzefur. Ehukae.

Now, as Ghemena tells young Eolyn early in the novel, it is not enough to merely recite the words. The maga must accomplish two tasks in addition to this. She must anchor her spirit to the living earth, the direct source of her power. She must also focus her will on the task she wishes to accomplish. If her spirit is not properly anchored, or if her focus is off, the spell can misfire or simply won’t work. (The more powerful the spell, the deeper and stronger one’s anchor to the earth must be; it is here that the use of the staff comes in handy for practitioners of High Magic, as it helps them to better channel the earth’s energy.)

That covers the basics of spells in Eolyn’s world.

There was some debate during the final edits of Eolyn, just before the book went to press, as to whether the spells should be in italics, in quotation marks, or both. We decided italics without quotation marks, because spells are not so much spoken as they are imagined and visualized with tremendous force of intention.

I would be very interested in learning more about how spells are constructed in other fantasy worlds, so if you have something to share from your own stories, or books you’ve read, please tell me about it!

Ehekaht, raeom enaem.

Dragon, make us friends.



Karin Rita Gastreich lives in Kansas City, Missouri, and Heredia, Costa Rica. She is an Assistant Professor of Biology at Avila University. Her pastimes include camping, hiking, music, and flamenco dance.

Karin's fantasy fiction publications include short stories in Zahir, Adventures for the Average Woman, and 69 Flavors of Paranoia. Her debut novel, Eolyn (Hadley Rille Books), is available as an ebook, in paperback, and as a hardcover. The companion novel, High Maga, is scheduled for release in 2014. She is a recipient of the Spring 2011 Andrews Forest Writer's Residency.

You can visit Karin at or at

28 November 2012

Update on fall 2012

I've neglected my blog lately, but not because anything is wrong. My life has been really busy!

I will have a real post up on Friday, 30 November. Check back then to read a great guest post by author Karin Gastreich on crafting spells for your fantasy story or novel.

In other news, all Hadley Rille Books ebooks will be on sale for a week starting tomorrow (Thursday, 29 November) for 99¢. Some new novels have come out this fall, so you may want to see what's new at Ebooks make great holiday gifts.

Here's some of what's been keeping me so busy.

1. I've been a guest at other people's blogs.

In October, I did a Halloween-themed post at Star-Crossed Romance on how to create fear in your reader:

Also in October, I blogged at Nicole Galloway-Miller's blog about whether one should research historical fiction before or after writing it:

In today's guest post at Karin Gastreich's "Eolyn Chronicles" blog, I talk about how preconceptions kept archaeologists from realizing that at least some of the women buried in the Royal Cemetery of Ur (in ancient Sumer) were probably ruling queens:

2. I am having a great—but exhausting—time teaching a University of California at Riverside–Osher Institute extension course on the "Epic of Gilgamesh." The Osher Institute here is one of several in the United States; as I understand it, all serve only people over 50. No homework, no tests, and no one is there because they have to be. My students are incredibly enthusiastic, making it a joy to teach them.

3. I also have received the edits for my summer 2013 fantasy novel, Ice Magic, Fire Magic. A new manuscript is due back to Hadley Rille Books by the end of the year, so I won't have much time to breathe until 2013.